MY First Coat I Made

This is my first coat I have made.I finished this coat in one day, believe it or not.I hope you all like it and tell me what you think because when the black pearl comes back I may put it in, so tell me if I should or if I need to work on it more.

I think you smoothen out the black outline as it makes it look less realistic but with a brownish colour insted of black it will look much more realistic, hope this helps.

thats good for a first try

I agree, Very good for a beginner, in the future after some practice, they willbe excellent

awesome for a first try!... i might work on the eye a little so that it looks a bit more realistic!... just a thought...

yes Its great for a first try

That's great.

Awesome job! I agree with RG and PurpleRoses. Take off the black lines and work on the eye. That and you might want to smoothen out the neck, and the back legs look a little funny. Besides that, it's awesome! You're doing great!

Nice ^

Thats really awesome for a first coat.

yes work on the eye a bit, no offence but for some reaason it looks kind of evil.
just my opinion though.
again no offence

Cool - the tail gives the strange illusion that it is moving to me - I agree, though, the eye is a little scary!

very Very good for a first try You will be a expert in no time if you keep on trying!!!
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Very, very, nice.

try smoothen the black lines a bit

Cool coat love it

This is great! Much better than my first go!
good work!
goanna

Wow! That's a really good first coat! I love the eye! =]