My first coat

Malliya · 1 My first coat Fri Dec 21, 2007 4:19 pm

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Im looking for an opinion on my first coat~
If I ever get a black pearl, I'm probably gonna make this available as a coat, but since there's alot of time until then, some critique to make the picture better would be highly appreciated. ^_^
Here's the coat:

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( Sorry for the huge water-mark, Ive had problems with art thieves before. =_=; )
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DarkDiamond · 2 Re: My first coat Fri Dec 21, 2007 5:07 pm

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Gosh, that's amazing! Is that your first try? I'd love to know how you did the main and tail. I really don't think i have any suggestions. It looks practically perfect!

Fran121 · 3 Re: My first coat Fri Dec 21, 2007 5:34 pm

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That is Fantastic! I Love How You Did The Mane And Tail!

Razzmatazz · 4 Re: My first coat Sat Dec 22, 2007 4:50 pm

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Beautiful! I love the mane. What's your secret? lol It is amazing and I have no critiques for it!

Keithurbanfan93 · 5 Re: My first coat Sat Dec 22, 2007 7:25 pm

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That is absolutly stuning!! amazing for yoru first horse you look like a pro Ic an not wait to see more!

ofrockwood · 6 Re: My first coat Mon Dec 24, 2007 3:26 am

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That is what I call... a beautiful work of art. J love how the highlights and shadings go together well. The way you got the muscles is... like... wow! Way to go! xD <3 it!

Fran121 · 7 Re: My first coat Mon Dec 24, 2007 3:37 am

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yea i love the shading Too! ^_^

DarkDiamond · 8 Re: My first coat Mon Dec 24, 2007 3:40 am

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Shading is gorgeous! I agree with bothof you! It love the way you blended it together, it looks like a real horse! The only thing is i wouldn't have outlined mine in black, but it makes yours look really good the way you did it!

Fran121 · 9 Re: My first coat Mon Dec 24, 2007 3:42 am

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what program do you use?
Can You Make A Tuto?

SilverShadowDarkness<3333 · 10 Re: My first coat Mon Dec 24, 2007 3:00 pm

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wow

` Callidora · 11 Re: My first coat Sat Dec 29, 2007 2:27 am

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that is a beautiful coat! soooo elegant! nice shading job! omgosh... honey, you don't need crittique! that is beautiful! affraid

:Dhow on earth did you blend it that well! you should make a tut! Exclamation

Fran121 · 12 Re: My first coat Sat Dec 29, 2007 3:31 am

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you should submit it

Guest · 13 Re: My first coat Tue Jan 01, 2008 10:10 am

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omg! that is amazing! the horse looks so full of life because of the sparkle in the eye! no critiques wat so ever!

black pegasus · 14 Re: My first coat Wed Jan 02, 2008 4:39 am

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its super pretty!!! i love how you did the face!!!!
as for critiques, i think i would make the tail less crazy, like note where the bone is and make al the hair follow the flow wait, lemme see if i can get u pic! Sad

black pegasus · 15 Re: My first coat Wed Jan 02, 2008 4:41 am

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http://www.horse-wallpaper.com/backgrounds/stunning-horse-with-sky-background.jpg.jpg

there! work on the tail so its more like that! smoother flowing, other than that i love it!

black pegasus · 16 Re: My first coat Wed Jan 02, 2008 4:47 am

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although not that smooth Wink

Warrior_Cats · 17 Re: My first coat Sat Apr 12, 2008 10:17 am

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That was your first? WOW! it looks wonderful!

Warrior_Cats · 18 Re: My first coat Sun May 25, 2008 1:08 am

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BTW, try blending the black lines in. it'll make it more realistic

Star-Shower · 19 Re: My first coat Thu Jun 19, 2008 6:49 am

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3 words, and just those

Oh My Goodness!
It's so amazing, though I have 1 crituqe.

BlackPegasus is kinda right, but I think I may be able to explain it simpler.

With some arabians, you know how ther tails stick up as they run, and it goes up along the tial bone, and all down and flows from there. Try to make it a LITTLE more fluid, but it looks great.

Your REALLY good, I so want more from you

goanna · 20 Re: My first coat Fri Jun 20, 2008 9:34 am

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Wow! I don't know what to say! The shading is GORGEOUS! Please, I beg you, make a tuto!
Uh... maybe the head is a tiny bit too short... but otherwise, great work!
can't wait to see it submitted!!!
goanna

Peko_Shirohana · 21 Re: My first coat Sat Jul 26, 2008 7:46 pm

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Wow! It's gorgeous! Is it really your first try? If you keep on doing this, I can't imagine how good your next coats will be like!

silver_Moonlight · 22 Re: My first coat Thu Aug 28, 2008 5:24 am

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i love it! the main and tairl are amazing!

Star-Shower · 23 Re: My first coat Sat Aug 30, 2008 1:15 am

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Oh wow! I would love to use it in art! ButI dont really want to like steal it! I would... but its so amazing! Smile

HEhe. Im not saying Im an art theif, Im saying I wish I could do that!

3-Poppy-xx · 24 Re: My first coat Tue Dec 30, 2008 1:51 pm

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Wow-ee, thats nice Smile

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My first coat

1 My first coat Fri Dec 21, 2007 4:19 pm

Malliya

2 Re: My first coat Fri Dec 21, 2007 5:07 pm

DarkDiamond

3 Re: My first coat Fri Dec 21, 2007 5:34 pm

Fran121

4 Re: My first coat Sat Dec 22, 2007 4:50 pm

Razzmatazz

5 Re: My first coat Sat Dec 22, 2007 7:25 pm

Keithurbanfan93

6 Re: My first coat Mon Dec 24, 2007 3:26 am

ofrockwood

7 Re: My first coat Mon Dec 24, 2007 3:37 am

Fran121

8 Re: My first coat Mon Dec 24, 2007 3:40 am

DarkDiamond

9 Re: My first coat Mon Dec 24, 2007 3:42 am

Fran121

10 Re: My first coat Mon Dec 24, 2007 3:00 pm

SilverShadowDarkness<3333

11 Re: My first coat Sat Dec 29, 2007 2:27 am

` Callidora

12 Re: My first coat Sat Dec 29, 2007 3:31 am

Fran121

13 Re: My first coat Tue Jan 01, 2008 10:10 am

Guest

14 Re: My first coat Wed Jan 02, 2008 4:39 am

black pegasus

15 Re: My first coat Wed Jan 02, 2008 4:41 am

black pegasus

16 Re: My first coat Wed Jan 02, 2008 4:47 am

black pegasus

17 Re: My first coat Sat Apr 12, 2008 10:17 am

Warrior_Cats

18 Re: My first coat Sun May 25, 2008 1:08 am

Warrior_Cats

19 Re: My first coat Thu Jun 19, 2008 6:49 am

Star-Shower

20 Re: My first coat Fri Jun 20, 2008 9:34 am

goanna

21 Re: My first coat Sat Jul 26, 2008 7:46 pm

Peko_Shirohana

22 Re: My first coat Thu Aug 28, 2008 5:24 am

silver_Moonlight

23 Re: My first coat Sat Aug 30, 2008 1:15 am

Star-Shower

24 Re: My first coat Tue Dec 30, 2008 1:51 pm

3-Poppy-xx

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