my first coat

it is not very good

http://www.flickr.com/photos/27548383@N08/2562996017/

this is cute tilly
love u always
and your bay is very vbery very gd
what does ur brotehr know
it isnt scary

thats pretty good
it needs more shading tho

here uis another one though it needs somthing ?


http://www.flickr.com/photos/27548383@N08/2566626951/

If I were you I would remove the lines around the edge on picture 1. I like picture 2. I really like the mane and the shading is better. Maybe blend the shading in a bit more and add some darker shading but I like it:)

Thanks

Here is another one

http://www.flickr.com/photos/27548383@N08/2572022367/
sorry here it is

did u base it on spirit?

I love it,for a first try that was wonderful!
(My first try was 4 circles head,muzzle,and body with to rectangles going down!)