My coats

Hi everyone!
These are all my coats I've made so far. I've drawn the bases for both of them!

Feather Dancer:


(it got accepted into the black pearl! I'm so happy!)
Let me know what you think! My first try so please don't be too harsh!
goanna

I've finished this fire horse coat, I just submitted it and it was accepted! It's called Fyre! Let me know what you think!

Ooh sorry its so big! :S

its grood!
the butt and the hoofs could of been bigger and the body's a bit long.
but it's a really good one goanna

The wings are far up and the chest is a bit small. the coloring is awsome

Yeah, looking back on it I agree with you both!
Thanks for your comments!

I'm making a fire horse now.... and a grey pony! Keep an eye out for em!
goanna

Ok, I would say it's very good fora first try, but shorten up the body a bit, and thicken up teh chest, and maybe make the hooves bigger, and save it under an edited version, so you compare and fix

Coloring is very very amazing, watch the face shading though
Yours is a lot better than my first

Well thank you! And thanks also for the tips! I probably won't change it now cos it's already been accepted... but yeah.
goanna

Does anyone like the fire horse?

I love all of the shading and coloring! Amazing on both

Thank you. Both are in the golden apple now, sadly no one's using them
But now I'm also working on a grey pony, will post it when done!
goanna

Their really cute

Tilly3579

i like the wings on the first coat. looks cute. are the eyes on the second one ment to b white?

Thanks!
Um, yes the eyes are meant to be white... lol
they're glowing.... white hot!
hehe

the eyes they golw crazzy awsum!

Those are good! On the first one, try to make the wings farther up and the butt a little bigger. Also work on the smudging on the mane and tail.

Thanks Everyone
Your suggestions will definately been taken into consideration in the future!