My first coat!eek

This is my very first coat. The mane and tail is not finished cause I got tired of making it lol but it should be finished soon.

Base:Blackrose
Filling:Chicklet_27(my name on howrse)

I deleted the wings and little beard and hair by the hooves.Please I am looking for constructive critisim.So please tell me what you think would could be better.

PS:I used Photofilter for all of it

opps i also forgot to do the hooves

nice job! way better than my first try! LOL! keep it up! i love the position the horse is in!

Thank you so much:D

It's lovely, especially for a first try (my ones weren't half as good- I like them getting finished quickly XD). I love the shading and the way you blended it al together.

You might want to smoothen out that ear though

What colour are you going to do the mane and tail?

I love the highlights on the neck! It gives it a very glossy look... I think it may help if you could do them all the relevant places on the body and sharpen up the head a little. But cool!

Thank you very much

I was thinking of making the mane and tail a white/gray or a black

very good

I think the mane/tail should be black.
This is really good, although i think you could maybe blend the tops of the front legs a little more?

ok thank you, I will try that

great I really like how the horse looks a little away from you!!!!
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Love it.

was that your first try? i love it!

by the way, it looks a bit blurry, try sharpening the edges or cleaning it up a bit more

thats realy good for your first! its better than my fisrt by a long shot!

That's beautiful for a first go! But i'd colour in the tail, it looks abit blank. Do it black, and smudge in abit of grey. Trust me, it works.
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